Todays lesson

   Today we went over our papers we wrote. It is some things I need to improve on when I write. First I need to learn how to plan better. Secondly I need to work on how to form my paragraphs. Thirdly I need to put the most reasonable instead of the u reasonable information . Fourth I need to not write those long Quotes. Lastly I need yo just learn how to put the information in the right spots .